What word can I describe this feeling, love does not seem to cover it for love is only a word. It is the east and Juliet is my sun,...my everything...not like the inconstant moon. Her beauty like no other, her eyes Two of the fairest stars in all heaven, her lips are soft but they are lonely, with my kiss they would be complete. Her cheeks are rosy O, if I were a glove upon that hand that I might touch that cheek! I would deny the name Montague if it would get me closer ti her,call me love and ill be new baptized; Henceforth I never will be Romeo. Nothing will stop our love for it is pure like the finest rose in the blossoming fields in the spring. What if they find me here? That does not matter my love is better ended by their hate than death prorogued wanting of thy love. My Juliet..... soon to be wife, when she spoke those words, Thy propose marriage, send word to-morrow, I thought I was imagining things... and to think she thought I wouldnt say yes, theres nothing ive ever been so sure about.
Monday, 14 November 2011
Romeo's diary entry
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This is a good diary entry, and I like how you personified Juliet's lips, saying how they were "lonely." I also like the way you used the sky and how you relate Juliet to them.
ReplyDeleteHowever, you need quotes from the script that need to be highlighted in a different colour. also you have a couple punctuation errors and one spelling mistake. but still, good effort
I agree that there is lots that is good about this, and you clearly understand what makes Romeo tick, choosing some good quotations to show this.
ReplyDeleteHowever, ultimately, it is too short to give us a sufficiently full insight into his character and the predicament in which he finds himself - and, therefore, does not dig deeply enough into their emerging relationship, or give enough explanation of the quotations you use.
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