This is the blog for Mr Savage's GCSE English (2011-13) class at the International School Brunei. It is for you to submit homework assignments, and for me and you to comment on each other's work. I hope you enjoy it and find it a valuable learning tool.
Saturday, 10 September 2011
The night when the moon turned red
The blade still drips of alcoholic blood, the room fills with a foul miasma of death. The courtyard is filled with wealthy guests drinking to their hearts content. Their drink-filled minds are too tipsy to even catch a glimpse of my shroud. Though I still felt eyes stabbing my back, but maybe it wasn’t theirs.
A withered spirit followed me, as his footsteps became louder mine became faster. I then went into the shadows. He demanded identification. He only heard the whispering wind. He drew his blade, and so did I. My reflection showed on the cold steel….his own was the last thing he saw. This man was loyal and brave, he deserved a soldier’s death and nothing less; this was not one.
As I wash my stains, I see a demon in the stream. He’s not smiling or grinning. Instead I see sadness in his eyes, as he stares at mine. I do not sympathize with his plight; he has committed a heinous sin, one which cannot be forgiven. Yet in him I see a noble person, kind and loving to both friends and family. When he lost both, he sought out the demon responsible. But in trying to slay the monster, he became one himself. It’s so tragic it’s almost ironic.
As I walk through the alleys, I notice children playing in the streets. I envy them, not for their youth, but because they are still pure, uncorrupted by the sins of the world. It’s sad to know that one day, that won’t be the case. “Excuse me sir, can we have our ball back.” A sudden smile crept on my face.”Sure”. As I return the ball what appears to be the mother raises her hand “Stay back! Don’t you dare lay a finger him, if you even touch him; I swear I’ll slit your throat!” I admire her motherly instincts, and how it went as far as to challenge me. I bowed apologetically and took my leave.
After a while I thought back to the woman. She reminded me of my own mother, willing to even kill the devil bare handed if it meant protecting me. Sadly she did…..or at least tried to. But then I wondered, why she thought I was a threat. My hood wasn’t on, my stains were washed and I was only returning a ball. Was it because she knew I was evil just by looking at me? And then I wondered if my own mother would recognise me after this. Or would she, like the former, see only a damned soul that god himself could not redeem. The rain hid my tears.
As I reach the exit I could hear a commotion headed towards me. Crying, yelling. It was as if something horrible happened, when in fact, nothing did. It’s mortifying, that how even from grave, that gluttonous boar still commands legions of deadly soldiers. As I retreat, I feel death’s shade cloak me. No matter which corner I took, no matter which roof I climbed on, no matter which way I went, they still followed, almost like hunting dogs, following the scent of the prey and closing in on the kill. They corner me off hoping to seal my fate. Instead they revealed theirs, covering the sky with blood. After the rain ended, all was quiet. Except for my heart, it mourned for my innocence, for it too fell to my blade.
Rescued
Underground
The Dawn of my Death.
Tears roll down her weathered face as she collapses to the tiled kitchen floor, grasping at the red hand print on her left cheek. My hand print. I stare coldly at the quivering woman in front of me with disgust. Briskly, I take my leave, insuring to slam the door behind me, just for effect. I scan the cold, deserted street, as I begin to walk, far from that place I call home, and that woman I call wife.
The cool night air washes away the uncontrollable wave of anger that consumes me. I had to escape. After nearly 50 years, I know the routine off by heart. As soon as you feel that hurricane spiralling up from your toes, turn and walk away.
The smell of salt fills the air around me, the crashing waves against the sand echo louder and louder with every step closer I take. I remove my faded, battered shoes and breathe a sigh of relief as I bury my feet deep into the cool sand beneath me.
I walk along the shore, leaving slight indentations of footprints behind me. I take a deep, salt filled breath as my mind takes me back, to the day of our wedding. The memory is blurred, lost over time, but tiny, insignificant fragments remain. A flash of her rosy cheeks and her deep loving smile find their way into view. Her sea blue eyes fixed on me as she walks down the aisle. We were so young, so in love. I smile back; all I know is that I love her.
I snap back into reality as I sharply exhale. I look out into the black pitch that covers the ocean. Darkness stretches out so far that I lose my gaze somewhere out at sea. I walk on, lost in thought. I travel back to the birth of our child, a little girl, my little angel. Her blue eyes looking up at me, her mother’s eyes. Her laugh brought so much life to our home, and joy to our hearts. I loved my wife even more then; she had given me everything I could ever want. I still remember that cold, windy night. It was 2am when I awoke to check on her, I was surprised that she had not stirred, with all the gushing wind crashing against the house. I had reached into her cot to fix her blanket, she looked so peaceful, I thought she was just asleep.
The years that followed felt like time itself had stopped. It wasn’t long before I started to blame her. I remember the very first blow, it is the clearest memory I have, the one that constantly haunts my dreams.
The salt is getting stronger, I’m sure of it. My eyes are beginning to water. But not tears, never would I shed even a single tear over her. I had turned all my rage, all my anger and confusion into one powerful blow that had knocked her to the floor and left her in shock. The beatings came regularly after that, every smash fuelling my anguish. She never once tried to stop me, she wouldn't dare. It was on that first blow that my love for her turned into a powerful hatred.
I look at my watch, it’s almost sunrise. I can’t possibly remember the last time I had sat up to watch the sun light up the world. As I walk on towards a distance park bench I feel an unfamiliar compassion welling up side of me. Regret? All these years, have I been living a lie? Convincing myself that it was all her, when she too experienced the loss of a child.
A lonesome tear trickles down my cheek as I sit and wait for the sun to cast its rays across the glistening ocean. The first beam of sunrise stretches out bringing warmth to my body, through to my soul. I think of the smile she wore on our wedding day and her weary eyes that have devotedly watched over me. They now give me a sense of comfort and guide me to the pending tunnel, of white light.
Light and Darkness? Task 1, TheTroll
"That's enough training for today, Jake." A man with long, straight black hair, a thirty-four year old but still looked young.
"What did you do to Dan!?" Shouted Jake angrily, his usual kind face wasn't noticed anymore, his rage had countless of questions. The man responded with throwing three daggers rapidly, all in different levels one high one middle one low. However the daggers had the same aim. The other man standing on the left side of Luke. Unable to escape the man tries to block all three but only managed to block one, the lower one. He ducks for the one aiming his head but he took too much time that there was one more heading for him. The dagger pierced through him, as if the armor was no help at all and he dropped to the ground, motionless with blood leaking out. Luke reacts and charges towards the man, using a curvy path in case the man took more daggers out. Luke attempts to slash him once, but the masked opponent dodged his attack with ease. Directly behind him, the man took out a dagger and stabbed Luke through the chest and left it there to drag Luke down to the floor. The skilled masked person was back to facing Jake. The same method that was used to kill the other man first was used against Jake. The three daggers came out rushing towards him; Jake had faster reflexes and barely dodged the daggers. The man took out another three similar daggers, Jake charges with his sword pointed towards the man. He missed, the man was behind him now, he remembered what the man had done to kill Luke, he was about to use the same method against him! Jake quickly swiped his right foot behind and without notice; his foe had fallen to the ground with Jake facing him. Without delay, Jake stabs his own blade at the enemy on the stomach so he couldn't move.
Thursday, 8 September 2011
The Man, The Warehouse.
"NO!" The man snaps. "I mean, there's nothing to worry about. wait. you can hold this," he gives her a little pluffed teddy bear. "You can keep him if you want." She takes the bear and and they creep into the dark, splintering cold warehouse. The girl grabs the teddy bear and tucks it into her arms. "Do you think people live here?" she asks. As he answered. They paused, a strange noise coming from underneath a large fallen down bookcase. The curious girl being 'Sherlock Holmes' goes to see what it is, but the man grabs her arm and moves his finger side to side. She doesn't obey and pulls away from his grip. She moves closer to the bookshelf. It shoots out like a bullet running straight towards her teeth sharp as knifes aimed straight for her tiny face. She falls to the ground. Pinning her down wet drool running off it's face down on to her shirt. It growled at her but the old man smacked it on the nose and it scampered off "SHES MINE!" He demanded. Petrified as she was, she managed to get back on to her feet. "What was that?" she stuttered, looking at her shirt and trys to wipe it off with her hands.
"No." His voice fully changed but coughs and points at the door.
Wednesday, 7 September 2011
1 Hour
Every one left the room leaving my parents and I lone in the silence. My mother was crying her heart out while scrunching the piece of paper in her hands. The tears gushed down her pale cheeks staining the blanket. She was kneeling near my bedside with her head resting on my bed.
"It's alright mom, every thing happens for a reason and when I do ill be going into a better place" that's what I told her and what I kept telling myself. I comforted her, as we all knew that the seriousness of my injuries would never heal and it was only a matter of time. "At least we can spend my last days together" I said hiding my tears with a false smile. My dad held my hand looking at me with soft gentle eyes and shook his head. I looked back at him puzzled. "One hour" he said holding in his tears.
I felt my heart stop beating as it finally hit me that life and all its wonders would suddenly stop in a mere sixty minutes! I didn't know how to react I couldn't help but stare into space. My parents hugged me and kissed my forehead goodbye. The next thing I knew was that the priest was next to me sitting on a chair I stared at him still partially in a daze.
"Child? Hello child? What’s your name? Look, I'm father Morris and I want to help you." he said calmly
"help me?" I said thinking, that sounds oddly familiar.
"Yes, tell me your sins and may the lord do the rest,” he said smiling, glad that I responded. Help me that sounds so familiar but this is not the time to be wasting time thinking about little things. Thus I immediately started to reflect on my whole life starting from the point when I was Baptisted. However as I was thinking I could feel my body deteriorating, I felt it getting weaker and weaker. I quickly thought of everything and anything that I have done and regretted and that I knew that it was evil. The abundance of it all overwhelmed me, I was truly remorseful for everything I had done even if it was something small. I felt like I had just murdered someone. The grief felt as if it was boiling inside of me, burning my soul away. It was too much to keep inside so let it out just as every one else would do, in tears. I told the priest every thing I thought of, he gave me penance and absolution, prayed and left the room. I felt extremely relieved after that.
I was alone in the room to do my penance. Still feeling very weak I was able to think about what the priest said that sounded so familiar "help me" I knew that it had something to do with my injuries. But all I knew was that I have been really sick for the past month due to high blood pressure, but I know that there was something more to what my parents had been telling me, and "help me" was the only clue I had to figuring out what had happened. As I thought more about it my head went into a daze I could see myself a month ago not bedridden, but free, playing with my sister in the garden suddenly I felt a staggering pain in my head like some one had pierced a spoon into my brain and scooped a piece of it out. I saw myself scream and grab my head struggling to find something that could support me as I lost my balance and fell flat onto the floor. Then in my dream I saw a flash of white and saw little glimpses of what had happened in he past month, I saw myself crying in the hospital room screaming “help me”, I saw my parents arguing about money, I saw the doctor giving me anesthetics, I saw myself in school again, and then falling to the floor. When another bright light and I found myself back in to the hospital room.
Every one came back into the room. They had thought that I had died when I had my dream
"I know what you did for me" I whispered to my dad he looked at me puzzled "you borrowed money for my surgery didn’t you?" I asked,
"how did you know?" he questioned
"I found it out" I answered with a cheeky smile. He called my mother and whispered something into her ear she shook her head and looked at me.
"I am so sorry I caused all this" I apologized
"It's alright. If it meant having you for even just a while longer it was worth it" they replied,
"so what was the surgery for?" I asked tiredly
"you had high blood pressure and an artery in your brain broke because of it, but the surgery didn't do much because we found out too late, after a month you still didn't get any better and you fainted“ my dad explained as a tear rolled down my mums cheek again. I started to feel too weak to even speak, I nodded to tell them that I understood everything and they let the other family members to say goodbye to me.
When all the goodbyes were done the priest blessed me and left. I only had two things to say left which were to my parents "thank you" I said tiredly and finally "I love you" I whispered draining all my strength to smile and with that I closed my eyes and fell asleep but this time when I wake up I was in paradise waiting for them to join me.