Juliette’s Diary
Today something out of the ordinary happened. Something I have never sensed before. It made my heart warm and vivacious. Something that made my cheeks go red like a rose blossoming in mid summer. Something that I wont have a discussion about with anyone as it is jammed and carved in my heart. I don’t even know if I should even write about it on this piece of paper. Well I guess I could gossip about it with the nurse as she is like a mother to me… But then again I am troubled and frightened that the word will go around the family rapidly. Well okay then I have to let it out anyway.
Oh my god okay here I go. It all started earlier this evening at the party my parents threw at our house. It was a pretty awesome party by the way. My mom introduced me to this man called Paris. I mean come on who in the world would call their son Paris. She wants me to get married to him. This is because he is wealthy and has good connections to the outside world. But to be honest I haven’t thought of getting married yet or have I. Well I’m not sure. I guess I could… Or maybe I will wait. But anyway I don’t like Paris.
Later on that night while we were watching a lady chant, a boy clutched my hand. I told him he could carry on grabbing my hand as he stepped back quickly… So he did then I pressed him aside from the party and we had this really really really bottomless conversation about whether or not he should kiss me. I really was eager, as it was my first time kissing a boy. So after making what seemed to be a sonnet about me being an angel and he being none pure, he finally managed to kiss me and it was marvelous! I’ve never had this feeling before but if I had to describe it, it would be one of a kind. His supple moist lips touching mine as if they were boats and mine a port, perfectly completed for each other.
Then I realized something. I didn’t recognize this boy. But well we kind of went on kissing for a fine 20 or 10 minutes or so. Until… The Nurse called me. Then everything took a turn for the worse and things went so fast and he ran away. Then the most deplorable news was blown into my ear. “He is Romeo, He is a Montague”. I was shocked and my heart stopped. My eyes were paralyzed and everything started moving in slow motion. I could see the disappointment in mother’s face. As he fled, our eyes couldn’t stop starring at each other. I could see concern, fear and confusion in his eyes. I was confused and troubled for I am a Capulet and I mustn’t love him but then again he isn’t bad at all! So after thoughts about what to do next the most awkward thing happened!
As I walked over to my balcony I started to talk about why did Romeo have to be a Montague O Romeo, Romeo! Why art thou Romeo? Then he popped out of nowhere. I told and begged for him to leave but he persistent “If they do see thee, they will murder thee”, he stayed. We kissed and talked about love and our families and about them hating each other. I feel kind of awkward thinking that he was hiding in the bushes but oh well. Through my foolishness and confusion I think I said something out of place “Marry me” “Thy Purpose marriage, send me word to-morrow”. Yes I told him to marry me tomorrow. Romeo “Take Thy Self”
I believe I am in love with Romeo. He is so adorable and pleasant. I give myself to him. I wonder if he can do that thing to me that everyone has been talking about. Well we will see once were married.
Well later that night he had to leave because Nurse was yelling and getting angry for me not to be sleeping. Well anyway its getting late I think I am going to go to bed for am going to be a wife tomorrow and nothing will get in Romeo and my way.
Goodnight Diary and I love you Romeo. <3 Good night, Good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow.
wow ! this really seems like a teenage girls diary ! i think you did a fantastic job describing the events and Juliet's mind set ! i really like the ending it seems to complete the diary. (: just a few spelling mistakes i picked up on, but seriously, well done !
ReplyDeleteI love the enthusiasm with which this diary is written, and all the emotions and thoughts of her teenage mind come rushing forth in every paragraph. Very convincing stuff indeed, and well done!
ReplyDeleteHowever, as an exercise in P.E.E., it is lacking because of the fact that you only refer very occasionally to the text itself. Ultimately, this leaves it full of energy but thin on substance, and does not give you the chance to develop the analytical skills which you will need in your essay. I hope that makes sense, and you understand what I am getting at, without being disheartened.
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Got it! Thanks
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